Hi,
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Title: I Have All Day

First Impression: I felt the pride you have in your granddaughter and the joy you feel doing things with her.

What I liked: The way she told you after each mash of the banana that it was ready, I can see the childlike innocence that a child has learning how to cook. Egg shells and all it is absolutely perfect.

What needs your attention: Gramma fought to share that she gave the little one kisses.

Favorite Parts: The dancing child on the chair who immediately turn the mixer to high, they never want to gradually work the buttons do they.

Overall Impression: It made me think of the days when my older granddaughters were young and all the things we made together. I miss those days so much. My younger grandchildren are not quite there yet but I am anxious to share those moments again. Thank you for letting me share in your priceless moment. I wouldn't have crushed my grandchildren's' eyes either. You are right we as grandparents have all the time in the world.
Lyn



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .