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Review of Honor Flight  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello {suser:pandapaws214: *Smile*

I have the honor of reviewing your writing for "Simply Positive Review Forum "  and as part of your auction package for the Blog City Fair.

Please remember I am a writer, who, like yourself, is also reviewed by her peers; therefore, I know what it feels like! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

*StarG* TITLE *StarG*

As I was wandering through your portfolio today, I came across this title, so I thought I would take a peek, and I'm so glad that I did. The title is perfect for the contents of your poem. Great job! *ThumbsUp*

*StarP* SPELLING, GRAMMAR, & PUNCTUATION *StarP*

Regarding spelling, grammar, and punctuation, I could find no errors. Perfect! *ThumbsUp*

*StarB* POETRY FORM, RHYME, & RHYTHM*StarB*

This poem is written as a quatrain and as such, it follows the form through the entire poem. Good job! *ThumbsUp*

*StarO* CHOICE OF WORDS/READABILITY *StarO*

Choice of words is excellent, which makes for good readability. When I read the poem out loud, I did not stumble or falter. Sometimes when I read poetry, it is confusing, but I could understand your poem perfectly and it told a story. Great job with this! *ThumbsUp*

*StarV* FAVORITE PARTS *StarV*

I enjoyed the entire poem, but let me tell you about some of my favorite parts:

*stargray* They signed up in '44,
to fight the enemy of war. - I CHOSE THESE LINES AT THE VERY BEGINNING OF YOUR POEM BECAUSE THEY SET UP YOUR POEM AND TELL THE READER WHAT THE POEM IS GOING TO BE ABOUT. THEY ARE PERFECT FOR THIS. GREAT JOB! *ThumbsUp*

*stargray* Many saw their friends killed,
prophecies of youth unfulfilled. - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE EVEN THOUGH THEY ARE SOMEWHAT SAD, THEY DO EVOKE EMOTION AND THAT'S WHAT A POEM IS SUPPOSED TO DO. VERY GOOD JOB! *ThumbsUp*

*stargray* It is so little for me to sacrifice
for those who saved our way of life! - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE THIS IS WHERE YOU SHOW THE READER WHAT THIS POEM MEANS TO YOU PERSONALLY AND THAT IS IMPORTANT. GREAT JOB! *ThumbsUp*

*StarY* OVERALL RATING/FINAL THOUGHTS *StarY*

I give this poem an overall rating of *Star**Star**Star**Star**Halfstar* for its creativity, originality, and feeling of patriotic pride. This poem is indeed a wonderful salute to our brave men and women in service and indeed we owe a debt of gratitude to them and this poem tells us just why we do. Their dedication to service to their country shines through in this poem and you have shown them the honor that they deserve just by writing it. Very nicely done indeed. You keep writing and I'll keep reading! *Smile*

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Have a *Rainbowl* lovely *Rainbowr* day! *Smile*

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Cindy *Heart*

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