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Hello, Kat Marie . My name is Charlie and I’m happy to be reviewing your poem that I found on the "Review a Newbie" page. Thank you for sharing with us and giving me this opportunity to review. The following are just my personal opinions as a reader. I am not a professional. If you find something useful, awesome! If not, feel free to dismiss this. *Cool*



*Questiono* Title

*Infoo* I think your title makes sense with the subject of the poem.


*Questionb* Subject Matter and Theme

*Infob* This poem is about the art of overachieving, but I think it's more from the perspective of watching someone kill themselves for their art or their work. The fact that "he" knows she'll never quit, let's us know that it's probably the woman's significant other who is worried about how hard she is working.


*Questionp* Flow and Readability

*Infop* There was no rhyming pattern to this poem. I thought it flowed smoothly and was easy to comprehend.


*Questiong* Tone and Imagery

*Infog* I really like the imagery of her wings failing to beat or her flying so close to the sun, it singes her feathers. We all know someone like this who always seems to be playing with fire or overworking. The tone was one of worry and concern, but also kind of proud knowing that she will never give up.


*Questionv* Possible Suggestions

*Infov* I thought that this poem could definitely be expanded upon to give the readers more insight of this relationship and exactly what she is trying to overachieve. Other than that, I didn't find any technical errors within your poem.


*Questionr* Final Thoughts

*Infor* Overall, I think you have a good, short poem here. It's an interesting topic that most people will relate to, at least to an extent. Thanks again for sharing with us.


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