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Hello Elle - on hiatus : *Smile*

I have the honor of reviewing your writing for "Simply Positive Review Forum " .

Please remember I am a writer, who, like yourself, is also reviewed by her peers; therefore, I know what it feels like! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

*StarG* TITLE *StarG*

The title absolutely perfect for this poem! Great job! *ThumbsUp*

*StarP* SPELLING, GRAMMAR, & PUNCTUATION *StarP*

Regarding spelling, grammar, and punctuation, I did not find any errors. Perfect! *ThumbsUp*

*StarB* POETRY FORM, RHYME, & RHYTHM*StarB*

This poetry is written in a free style form, and a such, there is no specific rhyme or rhythm form, but the flow of the poem is very smooth. Wonderful! *ThumbsUp*

*StarO* CHOICE OF WORDS/READABILITY *StarO*

Choice of words is excellent, which makes for good readability. When I read the poem out loud, which is the way that I like to read poetry, I did not stumble or falter. Sometimes when I read poetry, it is confusing, but your poem is very clear, and it told a story, which I really like and found utterly delightly. Excellent! *ThumbsUp*

*StarV* FAVORITE PARTS *StarV*

I enjoyed the entire poem, but let me tell you about some of my favorite parts:

*stargray* the softest touch of an artist’s brush
painting radiant skin and defining cheekbones. - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE THEY SET THE TONE OF THE POEM, SO SOFT, SO GENTLE, SO LOVELY. VERY NICE INDEED! *ThumbsUp*

*stargray* Inky lashes rest
as you slumber at peace - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE THEY GIVE THE READER SUCH A FEELING OF PEACE AND TRANQUILTY, OF RESTFULNESS. VERY WELL DONE! *ThumbsUp*

*stargray* A delicate portrait
in shadows and light… - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE THEY ARE SO DESCRIPTIVE. THE IMAGERY HERE IS BEAUTIFUL. EXCELLENT JOB! *ThumbsUp*

*StarY* OVERALL RATING/FINAL THOUGHTS *StarY*

I give this poem and overall rating of *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star* for its originality, creativity, and the ability to make me sigh and go, "Ah...." This poem is so peaceful, so tranquil and so serene. I absolutely LOVE it! Your imagery in this poem is spot-on and I can picture everything in my mind perfectly. I can imagine someone sleeping peacefully, whether it be a lovely woman, a handsome man, or a beautiful child - it doesn't matter - because you had the right feeling about NOT writing in WHO it was that was slumbering, but rather left it to the reader's imagination. Now THIS is very well-done. Excellent job with this; it could not have been done any better, my friend. All in all, I would say this is an excellent effort, and I would recommend this to anyone to read. You keep writing and I'll keep reading! *Smile*

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Thank you for allowing me to review your work. I consider it an honor and a privilege!

Have a *Rainbowl* lovely *Rainbowr* day! *Smile*

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