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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "Let love came in" should be "Let love come in". Other than that, no errors were spotted. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming pattern is right on, and so is the imagery and emotions. The entire poem tugged at my heart, but the last one brought tears to my eyes. This poor woman led a life that made her miserable. *Butterflyr*

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Sherri

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