Hi Fran,
My name is Lyn. I am doing a review for Simply Positive.
Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Curious Incidents of a Flailing Mermaid. The title is what brought me here to visit. I was curious.

First Impression: That you definitely need time for yourself. You seem frazzled.

What I liked: That are you a lot like me, taking on too many things at once.

What needs your attention: Nothing, I enjoyed reading it just as it was.

Favorite Parts: The mouldy wedding dress that a newborn baby could easily fit inside of. I burst right out laughing at that image. I was glad to read you were able to quickly resolve the issue.

Overall Impression: Blogging takes more time than you see to have right now but the time you do get there is very entertaining to read.
Lyn

review number 7

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .