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Rated: XGC | (5.0)
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*Sun*
A hot little number that got the juices flowing. This is a tale of seduction and excitement as the unexplained brings release and satisfaction.

*Star*
Reading this I kept waiting to see if this was a dream sequence or truly a visit from beyond. I am still left questioning and will continue on to the next in the series. This was a great read.

*Moon*
With each stroke and caress this sequence comes alive, sparking heat and igniting flames of passion and desire .

*Compass*
Overall, I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors. This is well written. The imagery was intense and the story alluring.



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