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Another great chapter as this tapestry is woven of sensual acts and graphic images delivered by word as we see the two lovers once again joined in tandem release. This hot tale is one that excites and delivers as it cascades down the page.

I didn't notice any technical issues to point out. It is well written, the grammar, spelling and punctuation all appear to be in order. The descriptions of action are believable and easy to follow. Great job!





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