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♥Streets of Dingle♥  [E]
♥we walked in Ireland♥
by ♥Hooves♥
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♥Streets of Dingle♥  (E)
♥we walked in Ireland♥
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It has been quite some time since I have visited your port my friend, so I am very pleased that you had three items on the list for me to review on the community college board. I wanted to start out strong and what better way to do that then with a review for a friend.

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I remember the dream I had to go to Ireland, and though I don't know if I truly will ever visit, It is great to see photos and read of it through the eyes of others. In poetic form we are transported to a far away land. There we get a taste of the beer, the view of the land and a sense of the sites and sounds.

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The rhyming format used for this great poem was spot on. I didn't have to force anything and the voice of the poem rang out loud and boisterous like the culture of the area. This great poem took me down the streets showing me the life of the part one Christmas past as I visited Ireland through the words of another.

I think the centered format, with the shamrocks above and below, helped to add to the tapestry of illustration the poem gave.

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The added explanation at the bottom of the poem takes it to a whole new level. I say that, because poetry is often left to interpretation. What a poet writes, and the visual a reader gets, is often two different ideas completely. For instance, before reading the below inscription of explanation, I originally viewed this as a walk from pub to pub in celebration, spanning a few cities. What I was missing, was this was more than a walk. By adding details below outside of the rhyme and format, we are able to view the poetic vision as you have created for us an eloquent scene of winter's delight as you walked the streets, visited a perfume shop, stopped for a bite to eat and more.

I think the added explanation gives a better insight to not only the poem, but also to the author as well.


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