Hi ~A.J. Lyle~ ,

I've just finished reading "Invalid Item" , and on behalf of "Gang's Monthly Review Board" , I would like to offer the following comments.

Small Disclaimer: I am not a experienced or professional editor of any kind. My only aim is to help and encourage, please disregard anything not deemed so, as that is not my intention.

Well Joy, this is the third time during "I write", that I've had the pleasure of reviewing your work. After reading this story to the end, I couldn't go with my usual template because I am suppose to be constructive and give advice, when truly I found nothing to advice you on. I am once again amazed with your writing, not to mention you wrote about a few of my favorite mystic creatures in this story "Werewolves and Succubus" totally HOT!!!. Your characters are well-developed and interesting, I love how you began your story with Tami showing how attractive Seth is, yet refusing to acknowledge how much she truly wanting him, and Lea the Succubus, thinking he's yummy. To be honest, I found not a flaw to examine or speak on. All I can say is just keep writing these fabulous tales, and I hope that I continue to run into them as you do.

You are a very talented writer.! Thank you for sharing your work.



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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .