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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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The Milkman

This is review #10 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

You have been selected as one of the lucky authors to be spotlighted by me for a review in conjunction with "Simply Positive Review Forum "  . Each week, the individual members pick six items to review, or more, for group credit.

I am stopping in your port today, because I found you in a new authors list. I was eager to see what you had in your port and this caught my eye.

I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it.
  I consider it an honor to have found your port and this great piece of writing. Thank you for taking the time to submit writing into your port. It is a pleasure surfing through your port, trying to decide what to review.

*Waterdrop*Thoughts and expectations from the title:*Waterdrop*
I knew just from the title that I was getting myself into something that would make me either laugh or cringe. It actually was able to do both.

*Waterdrop*How do I feel about the main protagonist?*Waterdrop*
I believe the main character is the baby, or to put it more definitively, the puke of the baby. How do I feel? I want to stay far away from one. This seems to be one very well written article that I feel would work better than holding an aspirin between the knees, when it comes to the ultimate protection from this ever happening.

*Waterdrop*Outstanding questions or issues:*Waterdrop*
Who dared you and why? Was this a practical joke, and how well was it received? Those are the only questions I had after reading this.

*Waterdrop*Are there any technical issues I want to query?*Waterdrop*
NO

*Waterdrop*My overall thoughts:*Waterdrop*
Overall I found this humorous. It also brought a smile to my face and I enjoyed reading it.


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