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Review number 2of week April 10-16

Hi,

My name is Lyn and I doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Looking Way Back. The title is perfect. I'm with you looking back makes me smile.

First Impression: I remember those days except for me they were in the late sixties early seventies and the price was only 29 cents. You made me smile and chuckle as I read your memories.

What I liked: The images as I read of a time so much sweeter than today. Was the 51 Ford, your first car?

What needs your attention: Nothing, it is perfect as is.

Favorite Parts: The kissing in the back seat and the hope of getting to second base made me burst right out laughing. Its been years since I thought of those days. We used to hit Duchess in our area and yeah, it seemed like we paid more times than not with coins chipped in by everyone. We never paid for our food in bills, it seemed like we always had to scrape it up together.

Overall Impression: I loved it. Your word flow and the images created make for a wonderful journey back in time.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was definitely my pleasure!
Lyn


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