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Plot and Content: I found this item with the random review tool. This was an awesome fantasy story/poem, I could visualize the palace and the frog, you really set up the story visually with your words.

Errors/Suggestions: I think I found a mistake: illuminating the diaphanous skin his back — I think it should read: "illuminating the diaphanous skin on his back" the word "on" is missing in your version.

What I liked: I like your extensive vocabulary, some of the words went over my head, reminding me of Edgar Allan Poe; he used a lot of big words in his poems.