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Plot and Content: I found this item with the random review tool. Loretta sounds like people we all have known in our lives, a know it all who won't stop talking. I didn't understand why she has a tendency for violence with her sister, but it just adds to the negativity surrounding her.

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind.

What I liked: I like how you took the time to describe a character type we are all familiar with.


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