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Plot and Content: I found this item with the random review tool. This poem was short and sweet, with so few lines you really packed a punch! Not only that, but I like chocolate too, and I think it is a perfect choice for the subject of a poem!

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind!

What I liked: I like that first line, it is very poetic. It seemed to me like a line written by a professional! I also like that you took the time to explain what type of poem this is, more people should take the time to do that, it's a nice touch.