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"My First Beer" 

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John Nation

This is review 13 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

You have been selected as one of the lucky authors to be spotlighted by me for a review in conjunction with "Simply Positive Review Forum "  . Each week, the individual members pick six items to review, or more, for group credit.

I am stopping in your port today, because I found you in a new authors list. I was eager to see what you had in your port and this caught my eye.

I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it.
  I consider it an honor to have found your port and this great piece of writing. Thank you for taking the time to submit writing into your port. It is a pleasure surfing through your port, trying to decide what to review.


As I began reading this I was transported back in time, before my birth actually, to a simpler time with a slower pace. Many things were more relaxed, including people. The rules and regulations we have in place now, weren't even thought of, and some would argue for the better, while others would say for the worse.


The story is well told. I was able to feel the wind on my cheeks as I became the main character, sipping the last few drops and eager to share the experience with my best friend. The actions ring true as if I was seeing this on a picture screen.


A very well written piece. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors to point out. The story was believable and presented in such a way as to capture the attention of the reader and hold it throughout.


I didn't see the ending coming, until it was almost upon me. This delivered many images to me.

First, perhaps the grass is not always greener on the other side. Though times were more relaxed, perhaps it wasn't always for the better, and some of the rules and regulations put into place today are benefiting many of us.

This was also a lesson that was learned from, the hard way. It made a lasting impression and helped mold the main character into who he is. The voice of the story speaks to me as if someone who has seen much and is now sharing those tales with us, in order for us to now learn from them.



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