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This is review #14 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

You have been selected as one of the lucky authors to be spotlighted by me for a review in conjunction with "Simply Positive Review Forum "  . Each week, the individual members pick six items to review, or more, for group credit.

I am stopping in your port today, because I found you in a new authors list. I was eager to see what you had in your port and this caught my eye.

I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it.
  I consider it an honor to have found your port and this great piece of writing. Thank you for taking the time to submit writing into your port. It is a pleasure surfing through your port, trying to decide what to review.


To be honest, I looked at the first part of this piece and sighed. Not being very religious anymore, I wasn't sure where this was going, or if I wanted to proceed. I think what kept me going, was the artistic beginning by the use of different fonts. This kept it alive for me and got me past the opening to FULLY SEE and understand the greatness of this piece.


After I read it to myself, twice, I then had to read it to my husband, and yes, I used three different voices to represent each character. Before I was even half way through, he was laughing out loud and had to stop making the pepperoni to give the story his full attention.


This was a well written story with great use of dialogue and satire. The comic relief that is shared here is of great quality and easy to understand and follow. I am someone who can kill a punchline in a joke, even reading it from the page, but not with this story. With this story I was able to use voice tone and speed to represent the actions taken place.


I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to point out. This was a joy to read and I am glad I stuck with it.




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