Both Ashley and Ethan had done things in the past that they were ashamed of. This is very good. This gives them each a reason to understand and forgive each other's shortcomings. Well done, Aisha!

There are still some places where your use of passive voice pulled me away from the story, but even with that it is easy to follow what is happening.

You are using good description to reveal your character's emotions. In a romance or erotica piece, emotions are very important, and revealing them in the right was is tantamount to them being authentic and believable. Some writers over-do the emotional side of the story and the reader will see the over-use. You have found the right mix of character actions and inner thoughts to reveal just the right amount to your reader.

I like the way you are using conflict to bring your characters closer. While it seems odd, conflict can bring people closer, especially when they depend on each other to resolve those conflicts.

I have more to read on this story and I'm looking forward to see what happens next.

Bikerider