Hello, it's just me, the loveable, fluffy, Easter Panda! I am reviewing your short story as part of the Simply Positive Group, because we were both part of this contest, and gosh darn it cause I like you! I really enjoyed this. I loved the little girl asking about the pixies! I found no errors in punctuation, spelling or grammar.

I think I would have like the pixies to be helping the girl by keeping her parents home because they couldn't find stuff, but that would be my story and not yours! I really do like it and I wish you well in the contest!





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