A Review For You in connection with "Simply Positive Review Forum "  [E]

"Knee Problems" 

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Rose Keeley

This is review #15 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

You have been selected as one of the lucky authors to be spotlighted by me for a review in conjunction with "Simply Positive Review Forum "  . Each week, the individual members pick six items to review, or more, for group credit.

I am stopping in your port today, because I found you in a new authors list. I was eager to see what you had in your port and this caught my eye.

I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it.
  I consider it an honor to have found your port and this great piece of writing. Thank you for taking the time to submit writing into your port. It is a pleasure surfing through your port, trying to decide what to review.


I too will be visiting the orthopedist on the 17th, not the surgeon yet, but for an unrelated issue. Actually I get to see them twice this week. Once for a finger, and the other for a shoulder. Two different ones each time.


After reading this I had a few questions for you. One, have you already been so that you know surgery is the only answer? This can be very invasive and take possibly 6 weeks or more to heal. Depending on when the surgery is preformed, could this effect your wedding? Then again maybe if you got it done right away, you will only be in a knee brace by then and that will be a better alternative to what you are going through now.


~Starting a sentence with a conjunction, but, or, and , creates an incomplete sentence for the reader. These three words are coordinate conjunctions used to join sentences or part of sentences that have the same grammatical status. Avoid beginning a new sentence with a coordinating conjunction (for,and,nor,but,or,yet,so). Coordinating conjunctions should be used for connecting between items of the same class within a sentence. In formal or academic writing situations, in particular, they should not be used to introduce a new sentence. Though the use of conjunctions to start sentences is becoming more of a norm in today's writings, it is still frowned upon in many writing circles. When used with slang terminology, the use of conjunctions to start sentences is a commonality. I have now come across two main circumstances where this happens repeatedly. The first is when the writer is putting to print exactly as they speak, and the other is with addressing or speaking to or for a younger audience.

~ i'm (always capitalize I and I'm a rule to remember is that "I am important so I should always be capitalized.)



Overall this is a well written piece. I only noticed a few technical issues to address. This would be a good piece to enter into a blog here. If blogging is your cup of tea, here is a group that helps with that process "Blog City ~ Every Blogger's Paradise" . I would be interested in following to see your progress. I wish you a wonderful marriage and a safe surgery, if that be the course you decide to go with.



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