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This is review #17 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

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A poem consisting of rhyming couplets that cascades down the page in love.


~Consistency in writing. I noticed that at times, this short piece is capitalizing the name "wolfie" is this a name or a description? If a name, this should always be capitalized.
~Always capitalize the word I, you are important and capitalization shows this.

~Second line, the letter u is missing from the first word.
~from the side note, I couldn't tell if faun was spelled as it should be or if it should be fawn
~ Fifth line, change were to where


Overall this was a sweet and personal poem. There were a few technical issues, other than that I thought that the message was clear.




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