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askpaddy

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The first thing I want to bring to your attention is that you do not have a rating selected for this item. This is against the terms of use and after evaluating this, an E rating is adequate. I would suggest fixing this right away.

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This was a wonderful story for young children. Have you already read this one to your grandchildren? If not, I would suggest setting this one aside for immediate reading once you are re-united with them. This was a fun story that was simple and yet held the attention.

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I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to comment upon. The flow and pace of the story is smooth and runs with just enough moment to capture the villain and entertain the kiddies. This is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing.





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