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 The Quintessence of the Thing  [E]
Poem for writer's cramp forum
by catdok
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Balloong*HI catdok! Welcome to WDC ! *Delight* I was so drawn by your evocative title on the Newbie page so here I am to celebrate you with a review! *Rainbowl**Rainbowr*

I had a lot of fun reading this wonderful rhyming expression with its fascinating words in bold! Your humourous view of writing and using big words is original and entertaining entry ot the Wrtier's Cramp. I like the sing song effect!

The poem flows quite well with a steady rhyme scheme. The rhythm is not perfect but it did no throw me off the read and message.
It was a bit tricky to read line 4 of verse 2 out loud though! *Bigsmile* I had to re do! LOL

Great words ahd me running to a dictionary to make sure I had it right. LOL I wondered what the Cramp prompt was--you could add an author's nte at the bottom of your piece for interest. Maybe the bold words might have been a prompt? *Wink*

This is so cool and fun that it is well worth tweaking at some point. Awesome creativity for the shortness of time the Cramp gives . Good for you!*Starstruck*

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