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Autumnal Spirits  [E]
A Dorsimbra inspired by a Pond Poetry image.
by Dave
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, I am PandaPaws and it has been a while since I visited your port, or at least it seems it has been a long time. *Smile* I have not tried this particular form, yet. I still have a problem writing in iambic meter and this seems like it would be way above my level. However, you have done an excellent job with it. Both the first and last stanzas are written in iambic pentameter, with the first stanza rhyming. I enjoyed the middle stanza very much, being written in free verse. I noted no errors in spelling, grammar or punctuation. Job well done, Professor!






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