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No Rest For The Weary (my baby killdeer)  [E]
Inspired by my yearly visiting friends, the killdeer.
by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, it is me, PandaPaws and I am reviewing your poem as part of the Simply Positive Group. I picked this particular piece because I, too, have experience the shrill shriek of a killdeer. What an interesting bird this is. I am thrilled that you actually saw the chicks, I have never been that lucky. You did a wonderful job with the stanzas in this poem, each one telling a distinct part of the story. I found no errors in spelling or grammar. Great job!






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