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 | Haiku Poems  [E] a bad day, a case of the Mondays  |
| (4.0)| Hello c-gates! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  I so enjoy the haiku form and am learning more and more about how to write it well so I was interested to read your renderings of the form.I Like the selection youhave on the page as they have a rather comical vibe and tribute to a bad day in them.  I had to smile at some of the last lines of you haiku. The zoo, the sauce and the phone dieing really evoked a response. I can relate to the last one about the door too. LOLMost of them I feel are more senryu, a cousin of haiku with the same syllables and line count but concerning people/personal themes as opposed to the natural themes in haiku. Still, often folks use the haiku name as it is more familiar. The format is well accomplished and each one has a perceptible contrast line that evokes our perception in another direction. I believe haiku do not have capital letters so they can be boundless. I wondered about "teased with the animals" wouldn't it be just "teased the animals"?  I had lots of fun reading these entertaining expressions, no matter the name.  Well conceived little dramas too.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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