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 Welcome to WDC Bob! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  This poem shows the close relationship of one to the lure of the sea and I can feel the admiration for both land and sea. Ilhad the idea that one could be land lover yet be free by the seascape which appaeals to the imagination. It was lovley to read aloud as it had consistent rhyme. longing tone and vivid images. I really liked the idea of the sea "shrieking" and the "throng" of adventuresome sailors. The rhythm of some verses were consistent while others had some longer lines. teh best flow occurs in verses 1,4 and 5. That being said, the variety of rhythm did not detract from the read or message. I wondered at the period after "owns me". I would add the category Poetry first for more notice that just Other!  Thanks for the reflective and sentimental expression. I enjoyed the journey as it stirred up memories of walking shores and wavy horizons, the magic lure of adventure and space!  Keep on dreaming.Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
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You responded to this review 04/20/2014 @ 1:52am EDT