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| (4.0)  Welcome mew,mew to WDC! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! Wow! This is a potent and personal expression that speaks of resiliency in overcoming trauma or crisis. I like the positive voice and strength of the tone and the determination in the last line. The free style form suits the emotional content and theme. The repeated phrase is very emphatic and purposeful. The building of strength is well shown in the movement of the mind's reflections. The use of periods also is emphatic and asks us to pause often. Not sure if grammatically correct in every case, but interesting for pace. This poem is inspiring with its strong voice as it makes a demand of oneself to trust in one's inner strength and beauty!  Thanks for sharing your personal crafting! Keep shining!  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/14/2014 @ 11:21pm EDT