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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Brian is a Streaker Try2StopMe

This is a wonderful little poem which made me smile with recognition. The whole poem works as a wonderful analogy, albeit one tinged with sadness. I think many readers will be able to relate to the feeling of being forever on the wrong side of the glass away from the light. The grass is always greener... as the saying goes.

Every word in your poem works. You capture a great deal in few words. The poem flows well. Personally I would remove the commas after 'life' and 'window' but that's just a stylistic choice and I still have no hesitation in giving this a five star rating.

It was a pleasure to read your poem. Thanks for sharing your work.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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