The title caught my interest, but after reading, it didn't quite seem to fit as everything was pre-planned, Luke never spoke throughout. I did enjoy the emotion and setting description, very well done in few words. The old woman's character was definately memorable, and you did a great job of working in the prompts. The story has dark, spooky undertones that reminded me of New Orleans for some reason. Flow is smooth and storyline holds your reader well, loved the twist at the end!
An enjoyable read that has many possibilities for expansion.

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