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*BalloonP*Welcome to WDC Ringa miyan! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!*Smile*

*Dragon* I am fascinated that a dragon was the first thing popped in to our head to interview--such a powerful and creative symbol that may indeed indicate personal traits. I like the idea of free writing from stream of consciousness and your note at the bottom was helpful in letting us know the purpose of the task as well as what you learned from it. It is awesome how personal issues can come up when we put them in the voice of a third person objective view.

The dialogue was interesting and I can see where you could expand on this dragon as a character. Quite original is the idea of an ice dragon in the Arctic--certainly would be an isolated life. I think if you edit you could use more interesting and descriptive word that "nice" *Wink* What would nice be like? give me a picture I can see in my head.

A few glitches: "relativity: needs to be "reatively".
"your not" needs to be "you're not" menaing "you are not".

This is a cool exercise and I glad you shared it. I hope you will keep on allowing the inner world to come forth. *Starstruck* This could make for a cool story starter.

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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