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 With the Tide  [ASR]
Three friends leave behind all they know, and sail into history.
by Graham Muad'dib
Review of With the Tide  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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This is a Simply Positive Review! *Burstg*

This was quite an interesting read. I loved the historical implications and the characters brought to life to enact what would soon be their fate. I could picture each character and sense their emotions.

Observations:

"He knew that the hardy natives of Grænland had been up since before the sunrise, headed Odin knew where. " Awkwardly stated.

"Some say Bjarni saw an [a] bad omen"

This was a fine subject matter for the, Journey Through Genres, travel prompt.

Well done! *Clapper*


Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering! *Delight*

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