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I am Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH reviewing your story as a judge for the
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Hello, tigerlilly24! This is a Simply Positive Review.

I could feel the love in this tribute throughout each paragraph. The sadness that tears at the heart of the family of an Alzheimer's patient, is intense.

You told the story with such strength, because I can imagine even twenty years later, the old wounds rip open.

I lost my mom eight months ago, thankfully she did not have Alzheimer's, thus she knew me right up to the end. I can't imagine losing someone years before they actually pass away. With that horrible disease, they are physically there but do not remember their loved ones, therefore it is like they have already left.


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"A single tear slowly fell from her one of her eyes as her mind triumphantly parted the black curtain ... "



Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering! *Delight*

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Web~Witch



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