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 | The Briefcase  [E] short story for WDC contest about TRAVEL  |
| (4.0)| Hello there!  I am Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH reviewing your story as a judge for the
Thanks for entering! Hello, Old Bear! This is Simply Positive Review.  This was quite a life's journey. An elderly gentleman takes the reader on his travels throughout the years with the same old valise he's carted around for years. It held his prize possessions, his written words. Observations: "I never got rid of one scrape [scrap] of paper that I scribbled on." "They [there] were times I enjoyed adding to it's contents." "So I loaded up my van and filled it with gas; briefcase across one the other seat." "Years ago my dad had took me here and his spirit seemed to reside there." I loved the ending. It was uplifting and made me leave the page with a smile on my face.  Good use of the travel prompt!  Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering!  Regards, Web~Witch
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