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Hello there! *Smile*

I am Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH reviewing your story as a judge for the
SURVEY
Journey Through Genres: Official Contest  (E)
Write a short story in the given genre to win big prizes!
#1803133 by Writing.Com Support


Thanks for entering!

This is a Simply Positive Review.

This was quite an interesting adventure story that had the reader in suspense as to their rescue from that island.

Thankfully somebody new the language and was able to communicate with the natives.

I like the idea that one so used to living a life of elegance, would have to struggle for an indefinite time if help was not found.


Observation: You had a couple places where the sentences were extremely long. There could be a little tightening-up here and there.


Otherwise, great imagery and fine use of the Journey Through Genres, travel prompt.



Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering! *Delight*

Regards,
Web~Witch



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