Hello. Southernemma, Summerwind here reviewing your short story contest entry, by random review.

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Title: Outstanding, it says it all, without giving anything away

My first impression: Your first paragraph, is a suspense filled introduction, which entices the reader, to want to find out
who is the accused, and why she was in a state with child, also why is she on trial.

What I liked: I thought the dialogue between the girl Catriona and the defense was very well written and was believable.
For a moment the story transported me to court room and I could feel the desperation, anger and hopelessness of the girl who was on trial.

Summary: For a very short story this was packed with suspense, excellent dialogue, and emotions
Exceptional story telling !

All opinions and suggestions, are just that, only my mine and they are meant to encourage and not to offend the writer

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