Hello brom21, Summerwind here reviewing your poem, by random. I review from my perspective of what it says to me.

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My first impression: Reading this was like reading a modern day Proverb. It instills a wisdom that goes right along with the bible Proverb of the Old Testament. It's all pointless, that you can't control anything and the only way to live your life, is release control and rest in God. The sun will come up the next morning, no matter what you do.

What I liked: I loved this line: Its futile and pointless, like grasping the rain. The poem in in its entirety, had great rhyme and I thought well balanced.

Summary: A well written poem with great wisdom and exceptional rhyme scheme.
Nicely written piece of poetry!

These are only my opinions to help and not to offend the writer.

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