Hello Myescape, Summerwind here, reviewing your work on this very short story.

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Title: I would have liked to see a better title, such as Just Think

My first impression: After I read this I was amazed at what a statement this little short story said. Without looking at the technical form and anything else, other than what it related to me personally. It said this: You can so lost in your thinking, whether your asleep or awake, it can consume you.

What I liked: I liked this line :She actually thought of something: maybe if she was awake, she could start doing something. It could mean so many different meanings, conscious, unconscious, day dreaming, asleep, but your mine is active.

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Summary: Interesting take on thinking. Original, short, to the point and it made me Think, and Think and Think. A little humor here.

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