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Plot and Content: I found this item with the random review tool. This was a realistic story about a wounded war veteran who returns home after getting out of the military. I found it interesting, because my Dad is a veteran who spent four years in the Marine Corps. I like the contrast between how mean the female driver who honked at him was, and the friendliness of Cristy.

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind, good job!

What I liked: I like how you gave him hope in life by meeting Christy. I also like that this story was set in Ventura, I live in California and I know Ventura is a nice area from passing through there from time to time on my way back to L.A. from San Luis Obispo.