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Given: Apr 19, 2014 at 12:31pm
Length: 729 Characters |
692 w/o WritingML
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Plot and Content: I found this item with the random review tool. I actually agree with your opinion about guns in this article, I think making them illegal would be a mistake, because criminals would acquire guns some other way, while law-abiding citizens would have no way to defend themselves. I have felt this way for a long time.
Errors/Suggestions: I found an error: The reader can quickly understand his essay is bout gun rights and gun ownership. The word "bout" is misspelled and needs to have an "a" added to the beginning of the word to make it "about"
What I liked: I liked the theme of this article, that making guns and ammunition illegal would be a mistake.
You responded to this review 05/01/2014 @ 12:53am EDT
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