I could see the story happening. It is about your best friend who loves some other guy. I think even between friends, these feelings of possessiveness and pain prevail. But then life is not just the two of you. Everyday brings a new link and new feelings.

Yet, as you do, I too love my best friend(s). However, when I got married, different feelings gave rise to a different relationship, which do no allow me to spare as much time to spend with friends. Life is like a stream. New water flows in replacing the old.

It sounds like a prose poem. I like the way you learned your facts about life. Yes, pain is inevitable. you had shown it quite well.
your imagery is good too. You could create visible images by expressing your mind.


Write on!