Hello Jenny

Through this simple poem, you could convey your feelings for your mother quiet well. I understand the loss of a dear parent. It is one of the most painful experiences of human life. Mothers and dads look after their children in a way which none can emulate. Parental love is one of a kind.

Your mother's portrait comes through with your effective use of imagery and figures. You have compared her with a memorable artist. she must have been as beautiful and vivacious.

The qualities of kindness and sympathy are the very character of a mother. Indeed, as you have so aptly shown, mother alone can be a soothing presence while one feels down and depressed. Her love is a safe haven for daughters and sons.
"My Mother was always near me
Wiped away my tears when I was sad"

It flows well.

Write on!