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 Garden   [E]
Haiku: Nature's woven painting of Spring
by turtlemoon-dohi
Review of Garden  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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"Garden "  is a beautiful traditional haiku of 5, 7, 5 syllables painting a word picture of a spring flower garden.

What I liked: My favorite line is the second because of the excellent word choice of feathered notes.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this well-written haiku. Write on.

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