Hi Jedi Moose, Summerwind here reviewing your Haiku, by random pick.

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Title: I like your title, because it draws the reader in, and gives nothing away.

First impression: First of all, a good Haiku is difficult to write, and you have done an excellent job. You have given the reader a visual of a beautiful woman coming into their life and making a lasting impression, beyond a few fleeting moments.

What I liked: You have told a story in just three lines: The beauty of a shapely woman captures the eye, The eye relates the message beyond the brain's memory into the soul. Making the reader question is the beautiful woman a casual glance or could she be more to him, like a potential soul mate, if she cuts deeply into his soul

Summary: Well written Haiku, with a story in three lines. Had me wondering who is this woman?
Set up a lovely visual in my mind.

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