Title: The title raises just enough curiosity, without giving too much away.
First Impression: I have to say, you created quite a fantasy visual of someone caught in a desperate situation. You could feel the emotion of fear as the character tried to remove the mask and it wouldn't budge.
What I liked: I enjoyed the reading the whole poem, but your humorous ending, was the icing on the cake. These clever last two lines:
I put on a t-shirt that read:
I am a politician!
Summary: A fun fantasy Halloween poem written with a clever humorous twist at the end.
I found It to very creative and original, and it gave me good laugh!
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