** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** When one tugs at a single thing in nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world. -John Muir- I am here to give your piece, An Alligator's Analysis a review!! Overall Thoughts... Ooh! That was a great and very entertainign piece! The rhyme and the rhythm was just right (though there were a few imperfect rhymes). Despite the honest thoughts from Mr. Alligator about wanting the zoo-goers for his meal, you kept the overall tone comedic and playful! Some Suggestion/s? I don't really have any suggestion to make for changes in this piece because I thought it was lovely the way it is. Although, I took a look at your other poetry in this folder and you had cute and suitable images for most of them, so why not one for this one, too? Additional Chatter! This piece reminded me of my visit to the London Zoo last month when my sister and I went to London. I am now having thoughts about writing a similar piece - but one about a lion! Thank you for sharing! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" "KEEP WRITING & INSPIRING" ~mARi~ My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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