Hello, Harvey Burklo, Summerwind here reviewing your poetry by random choice. I usually review on what I can perceive from reading it. Not technically. but more imagery and emotional factors.

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Title: Great title, although it says If I could have one wish, it sets up the reader to wonder what one wish?

First impression: I loved the simplicity of this poem, the words are simple and clear. It comes across to me with a type of purity, not contrived, but flows from the writers heart and soul.

What I liked: These lines are what says it all, in this delightful piece of poetry.Although not necessarily, new or original words, the poem still reaches down to the reader's heart and tugs on it.

If I could have just one wish
I want you because I know
I could never love anyone but you

Summary; A delightful piece of poetry written with simplicity, with a heart felt message!

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