The title "A walk in the woods"  hooked me. The rhythm is a little rough, but this reflects the theme of the poem. The rhyming words compliment the rhythm as it moves the poem's plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, To find they never knew about the trees that she hid in her bedroom, because it emphasized that the child's thinking about the trees was more mature then her mother's.

Technical Problems or Typos: The only issue I encounter was inconsistent punctuation, which does not detract from the message of the poem.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .