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Liam Neeson Doesn't Need MY Euros  [13+]
Hooves' Trip To Ireland of 747 Words Via Aer Lingus
by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello there! *Smile*

I am Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH reviewing your story as a judge for the
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Journey Through Genres: Official Contest  (E)
Write a short story in the given genre to win big prizes!
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This is a Simply Positive Review. *Tulipv*


I must thank you for taking me on the wildest plane trip ever!


Firstly, the fact that I was traveling through the eyes of a bull, made for a meaty storyline. I was mooved by Hooves predicament and could feel his fear. Do bulls sweat? *Dropo*

Anymoo, this was such an amusing trip that fit uniquely withing the Journey Through Genres, prompt.


Observation:

"He talked and explained how critically important it was for all of us on-board to donate " "Explained" implies he spoke, so no need to say talked.

I enjoyed your story, Hooves. Now it's time to moove on to the next one. However, I will still have images of Hooves imagining the plane dropping into the sea, leaving him for shark food. Nasty stuff Liam Neeson had planned for his captive audience in the air, eh?
*Plane*


Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering! *Delight*

Regards,
Web~Witch



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