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 Haiku - Rose in Crystal Vase  [ASR]
Beautiful rose placed in fine crystal vase. Myriad light reflections. How long?
by GeorgeWDeMuth
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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The title "Haiku - Rose in Crystal Vase"  and description of this poem hooked me. This is a traditional haiku of 5, 7, 5 syllables which paints a beautiful and sad word picture of a rose in a crystal vase.

What I liked: The last line is my favorite because it suggest that the rose is crying.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Write on.

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